Looks clean, but watch your back (Dim) side!
I tested and rejected previews with the Huawei Watch for Women, because I didn't like the smaller watch faces and the white on white look. It looks great in fullscreen black-backed previews, but I'm guessing most users don't ever click to that.
1. Good job with your Dim side.
2. It looks nice as is, but you might consider switching out the texture of the minute hand to look less metallic, for a softer material like mother of pearl.