I am new to creating watchfaces. The few that I have made seem to work fine, both in Active and Dim mode, on my Samsung Watch. However a couple of folks who have synched the face - and have TicWatch Express watches - are commenting that in dim mode they can’t see the time. I have tried dim mode in Creator and can see the time and I’ve tried viewing the watchface on a TicWatch Express and the time does appear.
Once you are in the Facer editor, copy the URL from the browser address deleting the word “edit” at the end and paste it in your message, it should appear as you type the message in the preview window on the right
I can not see anything wrong or unusual in your design.
I have had two issues in the past with faces not displaying correctly on some watches and on the Facer app; the bracket problem ( which you do not have ) and what appears to be a problem with the font I was using not being displayed on some watches. So the only other thing I can suggest is to try a different font.