First off welcome to facing! I really like your first design.
If I were to give any feedback I’d say there is a lot of space available so I would make some of the fonts slightly bigger. Not to much because I think the fading stars are big part of the face and I wouldn’t want to take up to much of that area but I think the font may be harder to read on some of the smaller screens. Also maybe give the weather icon just a bit more room because its overlapping the date just a bit.
I think you did a great job though and I look forward to your next creation!